108-3          GUIDELINES FOR CREATING THE FREE FORM SECTION

 

108-3 A.     MAKE SURE YOUR WRITING IS CLEAR AND EASY TO READ


1. CLARITY

Information entered on a notice must be clear and concise so that anyone reading the notice will understand what action is being taken on the case and the reasons for that action.

 

2. SPELLING AND GRAMMAR

 

Review notices before sending them to ensure spelling and grammar are accurate and correct.

 

3. SENTENCE LENGTH

 

Sentences should be short with a maximum length of no more than two lines. Keep the average sentence to about 15 words or less. Try bullets for short lists.

 

4. WORDS


Use simple words with no more than 2 syllables whenever possible.  Avoid hyphens and compound words because these affect readability. The following chart gives some examples of possible substitutions:

 Instead of:

Use:

 Instead of:

Use:

Self-insured

Self insured

submit/provide

give

verification

proof

anyone

any one

discontinue

stop

beginning

start

additional

more

excess

over

increase

go up

decrease

go down

effective

as of

contain

have

advise

tell

required

needed

determine

find

obtain/receive

get

   


5. ACRONYMS AND SHORTHAND


Avoid the use of acronyms such as TA for Alaska Temporary Assistance Program, and abbreviations such as ”thru” for ”through.”

 

6. USING THE WORD ”YOU”

 

Avoid beginning sentences with ”you” whenever possible, especially in adverse situations.

 

For example:

Use ”We did not receive” instead of ”You did not give us..."

 

108-3 B.     INCLUDE IMPORTANT INFORMATION SPECIFIC TO THE ACTION TAKEN ON THE CASE OR ELIGIBILITY DECISION:

1. INCOME INFORMATION

 

2. RESOURCE INFORMATION

3. DEDUCTIONS

 

4. PENDING FOR INFORMATION

5. FAILURE TO PROVIDE

 

108-3 C.     TONE OF NOTICE

 

In addition to making notices clear and easy to understand, aim to make them effective. Caseworkers must ensure the tone of their notice is pleasant for clients to read. Keep the notice professional, objective, and non-threatening.

108-3 D.     HELPFUL TIPS FOR EIS NOTICE SCREENS

Helpful hints for composing notices are available in EIS by pressing the F10 key on the NORE screen. The information includes tips on formatting, completing notice fields, and macros help.

 

 

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2017-03 (12/17)